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A beautiful story, with plenty moving ideas in there, love how the children get lost and find their way, also love how much they adore Adam in here.

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I’ve been thinking about the first family in Genesis. I thought it would be fun to write a series of stories about them. I think there is some emotional depth. For a start, Adam and Eve would likely have felt so guilty about what happened. How they deprived their children of Paradise.

I’m publishing another story in the series tomorrow, where Cain breaks a plough.

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That's a great idea! I love it! Please do so, you can do them in this style.

As to that story, mind if I wait to review until after you publish it so that I can do each of the three together in one large post?

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Yep. 👍🏽

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